I like the story, but I would’ve been better the author when more in-depth about the main character like telling us how he got to this point. How did he feel when he got there, how did he get setup as a riverdock, and the thing he did to live and get his name out there that he’s the best to go to.
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LIKEK0rv1nBl4ck:i try but this is my Seconds Story and English ist Not my first language i will become better with other Storys and the more i Writer thank you for Reading