First couple chapters was okay. Then turned into a Japanese Ero Light Novel. The story is a harem that uses DC names. That's probably the only way for it to get some initial attention.

Jim Gordon doesn't mind his teenage daughter sleeping with a boy... right?

There's some real creep factor in this fic.

Did he seriously groom a young girl for 6 years?

A 10 year old walks into a bar, flexes on everyone, and nobody says a thing. Maybe Gotham is more messed up than I thought?

A Yujiro Hanma in DC would automatically make him the top martial artist in that time. Although he's supposed to be a normal human, he's already broken the limits of human potential. There are better fighters, like Karate Kid, but Yujiro is still pretty good.

Some awkwardness regarding "reparations".

First time I've read smut in an American Comics fic. Eventually the smut was stopped but it was still awkward. The story is decent. There are parts which feel boring and made me want to quit. The writing style can be confusing at times like fragments, run on sentences, and poor transitions. The DC characters and world feel legit. Overall, it's okay.

Seriously this writing style is confusing. I feel like there are so many fragments and run on.

This chapter was pretty good. Hope the writing gets better.

The story was ok but also lazy and rushed. The homosexual banter was really off putting, awkward and dropped. The novel wasn't going anywhere. It was all about the MC knowing everything and being beyond OP at the start. Why call him superman when he was basically the presence.

It was bad enough for retail comics to cater to today's social climate but now fanfics as well... I hope it's just this chapter.

It starts with Marvel and then DC. There's no strong points to this story. Everything is pretty much average. Every 'arc' greats wrapped up quickly. Read if you got time to waste.

Meteor that appears out of nowhere, brilliant! Keeps in line with comic logic.

His new DC origin is a blend of Superman/Maximoff too funny.

Well, it's a fanfic so anything goes.

Shouldn't TOAA still be more powerful than Golden Superman?

A decent DC based fanfic. The MC seems real enough as a transmigrator to the DC comic world. The author loves calling out the logical fallacies of the comic world but it's like saying wrestling is "fake". Overall this is still a quality DC fanfic worth taking a look at.

change parameter to perimeter

I think "parameter" should be changed to "perimeter".