How is it that a play can see though his Ex to skill that supposed to be able to deceive the world all of a sudden, makes zero sense especially when he’s the only one un he has and ax rnk skill all the same

Is there a need to show the whole description of skills every single time? We can get a gist of it just with the names and when they are about to use the skill or after they use the skill you can give the reader a description on how it works if you haven’t already, at this point you taking up wording space making the whole explanation extra long for no apparent reason.

There no need to waste a whole page showing information we already know unless there is a big change, each of the pages cost a lot of coins as it is. As a reader I feel like you doing so is taking advantage only giving little new information and copy and pasting information we already know to make ppl pay 20 something coins for not even a full chapter, really not cool. My opinion anyway

It’s been 20 chapters and we still haven’t gotten anywhere, makes me feel like author is using the previous information to make it longer then needed. Watch as all free chapters lead to nowhere, had high hopes for this until now

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Thanks for the chapter

What If Leonard gets both jokers and uses his other personality for the second one, me personally I like it more when it’s the mc exclusive kind of card.

Thanks for the chapter!

Chapters not working

I am so disappointed the story really had a lot of potential but falls short, the way you portray the mc is horrible and needs a lot of work, if your going for character development the execution need work as well as your grammar. Anyways I have to drop, I hope you the best.

It’s not that ppl can’t stomach what happened it’s how it happened I mean this story started with the government leaving the citizens to fend for themselves when they knew an attack was coming and mc found out that truth so he should know not to trust them, so to leave his daggers with them is beyond reckless it’s down right idiotic, making absolutely no sense. Now if they were stolen from him somehow because of carelessness, naivety and being tricked instead of because he left them, it would be more understandable.

I like the mc and all but the disrespect he gives to the owners of the house is a bit much, having a cold attitude is fine but greet and thank the owners of the house for their hospitality don’t act like you own the place very uncool.

Great because I hate systems with a passion glad it’s only there for information👍🏾

This seems like a rip off of The Demonic Sword buddy

This story seems like a rip off of The Demonic Sword honestly, no originality 🤦🏾‍♂️ if you think I’m wrong you obviously have not read the novel.

Another Author that gives up on the book before it even gets started🤦🏾‍♂️ It’ especially irritating when you choose to spend money because you like the and want to support the author only to be abandoned. My star ranking is the way it is because the author does not finish what they start simple as that.

I just want to make sure this book is going to be updated eventually before I continue to invest my hard earned pennies, this is one of my favorite books so I can only hope this is a short hiatus. Please let us know if you have given up on this book or at least the book’s status as of right now would very much appreciate it thanks and good luck.

For a guy who was tricked in the beginning of the story his sudden logical thinking and resourcefulness just doesn’t add up it just makes it hard to believe and read.

What happened? Are you giving up on the story? No more chapters? I’m a big fan of the novel as well as a paying customer so I’m pretty surprised it’s been a whole month with no update.

Very nice that ending was great 😌