Get Dawn

I read the raws that the translated novel came from and it gets really racist against the black people that live in the land of lightning. They end up as slaves suffuring under Hidan (who the MC recruits). Their balls get cut off and they have to work as animals too. All around bad experience.

The cardinal rule of naruto is "when in doubt, blame Danzo". 99% of the time anything bad that happens is his fault in some way or another.

I really like your story. I'm a big fan of Reverend Insainity so I'm always happy to read fanfics about it. I just hope that you stick with the story and not drop it.

Why does he want to eat the world? Doesn’t he care about some of the people living there.

I wonder if cedric can stack shockwave martial arts. Rokugan plus fish man karate plus hassoken (the thing that the pointy-headed guy used). Maybe his body control can eventually copy racial abilities like electro for a water control plus electro combo. Maybe Cedric can find a way to learn about lineage factors and copy devil fruits like vegapunk did with the seraphim.

It seems like the system hurts him more than it helps him.

I changed my mind. I’m down for adding in new elements to RI as long as it keeps the charm of the original. Maybe you can add girls from series with only one or two good waifus like tatsumaki and her sister from one punch man or yoruichi and orihimi from bleach?

I mean you managed to get orochimaru and tsunade in a believable way in this novel so I think that you can find a way. Fang Yuan got multiple girls including that city lord’s daughter and the snow princess from the other races and he never even cared about any of them. I think that a kinder protagonist could do better. Especially with things like luck path, emotion path, human path, and the love gu. If you can’t think of a way than that’s totally fine. I’m happy with anything as long as it is reverend insanity.

Maybe you can do something similar to the heavenly court with love gu plus human path plus blood path plus a big harem and make fate literally love you. You’d also catch the star venerable in a two for one deal. You are psychicly linked to your clones in RI so you can use them to help manage the harem. If great sun can do it then so can you!

Remember that the great sun venerable had 1000s of wifes so maybe you can spawn as one of his many descendants and learn luck path for plot armor. Plus you can go after the heavenly demon girl that eventually got the love gu along with beautiful women from other races. You can also try to infiltrate the human path painting in advance and learn human path. I think that learning transformation path is the best because you can visit the ice fields to learn it quickly and it allows for greater flexibility. Eventually with transformation and human path you can create clones with their own special physiques and learn every path. I think that you could also do some op stuff with the love gu plus blood path plus human path plus a harem. Remember that love can literally do anything including defying fate.

Why not just do a normal reverend insanity fanfic and add girls or just go for the ones in reverend insanity like the ice girl that was gender bent, the butterfly girl that is the future venerable, the bunny girl with the split personalities, the girl in heavenly court who knew wisdom path, and the girl in the north area with the special physique. I’d be really excited to read a fic about reverend insanity and I think that it can stand on its own without any gimmicks. I guess you could use other series to help flesh it out but I think that reverend insanity is really cool as is.

That’s too bad. I would’Ve liked For him to have a harem

Enhancement abilities are usually pretty lame so I hope that you can find a way to make his future hatsu interesting.

I cringe a little every time Wolverine says pup.

Have you thought about creating a game item that has all of the science, tech, books, games, and movies on it for the other world?

Who is ein and where can i find his stories?

Is he going to get the domain of medicine too like the orginal Apollo?

And some countries put Muslims into concentration camps, bolt people's doors shut, and didn't restrain people from traveling abroad in a worldwide pandemic.

I've found that most of Fang Yuan's "plot armor" can be explained by heaven's will manipulating things so that he wrecks spectral soul's plan, venerables manipulating things so that he destroys fate, future knowledge, schemes, or his actual luck path methods. I feel that his plot armor is more reasonable than in other stories.