Thank you so much, if you have any feedback for me. Do comment on the novel or discord! :D

This isekai story is interesting as you read further on. The MC is confused at the beginning, not the typical absorbing memory from the previous body cliche, and the MC also questioning his modern morals to the past era where carnage and chaos littered the street. There are mistakes here and there, but who didn't do any mistakes in webnovel? But the mistakes are getting less and less as the author progress through the chapters. Overall, it is a nice book to read if you like war, MC using his wits, and scheme.

maybe the Man and the Ground shouldn't be caps and the hypens is a bit too much I think..

except if Yiyi face already has blood in it

Maybe you can search for another word to describe Yiyi as I don't know how to imagine 'bloodying'

Wasn't

It a great beginning, an intriguing one where the reader wants to learn more about the future happening.

in his what? lmao dont leave cliff hangers in this kinda conversation dude, you're just too much hahha

I'm preparing it in the 20+ chapters range, but it can also shorter. Sorry if it took longer, as I have to work, handle my business, and also writing my thesis, right now I barely had a good sleep. Anyway, do be patient with the story as I too want some action :D

I'm still writing one haha

lol, I'm just kidding

Thanks for the stones, hope you'll like down the road~

Maybe ;)

Thank you, I still grope around as I wrote this story. I'll be waiting for the stones then ;)

Thank you for your kind word, is there any opinion you would like to say? As this is the first time I write something :)