Why have you deleted the last 2 chapters?

Ngl I haven’t had a single clue of what’s going on since around the time the mc gathered all those people however many chapters ago that was.

This chapter seems to have a lot more mistakes than previous ones. Maybe I’m wrong since it’s hard to remember what happens when there’s almost a month between chapters.

Lost me at horse man of death

Only took 7 chapters to ruin any chances of this being decent

Are you machine translating this? Also regardless of if that is the case are you even reading what’s written?

Thought it was a typo before but clearly the author cannot spell “Property”

Strange that no one is mentioning the weird English. The author seems to be adding random words in sentences that don’t make any sense.

The second half of this chapter was pretty bad to read. Almost every paragraph started with “She” but not one was a description given or a name. It doesn’t give a sense of mystery if that’s what it was intended to do, it just made it repetitive and boring to read.

So the filler has ended and after a chapter or two we are going not forwards but backwards in the story. Great…

Not surprising that the only chapter that is readable is a copy/paste from the wiki page.

I hope the grammar improves because this is pretty painful to read. Good premise though.

More filler…

Please god no.

Truly a “genius”

Well it was going well but this chapter lowers expectations a little.

Have a shot each time “Nine-Tails attack” is mentioned and you will be dead before the end of the first chapter.

Developing a character does not mean you have to start out with them being unlikeable.

The least you had to do was format it correctly but you haven’t which makes it annoying to read.

I was a little worried when they first turned up at that house a couple chapters ago and unfortunately it’s turned out as I feared. I don’t know why he wants or needs that power as a character and I don’t know why the author feels the need to give him that power either.