*assassination not decapitation

cang = blue. try to find an editor .

who is juzo nagi? is that supposed to be kushina ?

better not go. The quality of the translation is worse than yours.

there exist one but it was abandoned at chapter 25. There is no reason to stop translating it. If you want go to deadly novels . in to get the rest to make it easier to translate 😎

Man you suck. After i realised that you stole your other story I went to fanfiction and I found this story there as well. No shame or original thoughts at all heh?

the story seamed familiar to me so it took me a while but i remembered. This is from fanfiction, written by cloud9stories. Not only are you stealing his work but you wanna profit from it too? Shame

I don't understand why you chose this ff, there are other much better on fanfiction. Now this story in my opinion makes no sense. Apparently there are a ton of Naruto that somehow got into the DC and Marvel Universes and all of them are beyond op cause why not. There is smut and the harem part makes no sense to me(just cause Jessica Jones can't keep up with MC). The Mc Naruto(cause there is another Naruto who is also op of course) has Many powers some redundant is rich but he steals stuff so that Shield has something to blackmail him with and is familiar with Shield but we dont see how. Anyway for me this story is kinda Meah.

no continuation here ppl. The updates were supposed to start 8 days ago and until now no original chapter was posted

After all that bluster about continuing for the original author and no updates is 15 days. In the end you did not write a single new chapter. I'm honestly disappointed in myself for getting my hopes up.

You seriously need an editor. Its diagon alley not slanted lane...

It's Hufflepuff

does it have any editing or its a copy from mtl?

too bad. This was one of the few novels that had regular updates and in bulk. 😭😢

hooly fk! i clicked on a review expecting to see if this novel is good and stumbled in a debate with a feminist vs everyone. Don't think this is the best place to have this discussion but what do I know. I'm still not sure if this ff is good or not

Wb. I was scared you were gonna drop it.

The story is interesting though the harem part was kinda forced. The only minus would be the quality of the translation. Sometimes it feels that this story could use a editor. Furthermore, you can find places that aren't translated or make no sense. Are you using google translate or doing it manually using your knowledge of Russian? In conclusion: while it's definitely not the best translation out there, it is readable though it may annoy some people. Spoilers from here..... The Mc is reincarnated as Naruto and he has a twin sister. His cheat is a system that his past self created and he uses it to grow stronger: he created a new type of dojutsu that is based on sharingan, byakugan and senju genes. He also has magic and reiatsu but those aren't that prevalent, mainly using those as a quick top up for chakra. Also as a minus, the MC goes around inviting every hot girl into his harem(which includes his twin sister Mito that doesn't know they are related). This is definitely not everyone's cup of tea.

The premise is interesting but the writing is pretty bad. I'm not expecting you to be perfect but at least separate narration from dialogue. Furthermore you are constantly misspelling key words from naruto that would be impossible to do if you watched the series or read the manga. To me it feels like a poor translation; hope you improve.

*compile

Itachi