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Verthragna
VerthragnaLv72yrVerthragna

The premise is interesting but the writing is pretty bad. I'm not expecting you to be perfect but at least separate narration from dialogue. Furthermore you are constantly misspelling key words from naruto that would be impossible to do if you watched the series or read the manga. To me it feels like a poor translation; hope you improve.

Naruto: Indra Otsutsuki Template System

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