webnovel

Review Detail of Verthragna in The Way of the Demiurge - The Ark of the Soul

Review detail

Verthragna
VerthragnaLv72yrVerthragna

The story is interesting though the harem part was kinda forced. The only minus would be the quality of the translation. Sometimes it feels that this story could use a editor. Furthermore, you can find places that aren't translated or make no sense. Are you using google translate or doing it manually using your knowledge of Russian? In conclusion: while it's definitely not the best translation out there, it is readable though it may annoy some people. Spoilers from here..... The Mc is reincarnated as Naruto and he has a twin sister. His cheat is a system that his past self created and he uses it to grow stronger: he created a new type of dojutsu that is based on sharingan, byakugan and senju genes. He also has magic and reiatsu but those aren't that prevalent, mainly using those as a quick top up for chakra. Also as a minus, the MC goes around inviting every hot girl into his harem(which includes his twin sister Mito that doesn't know they are related). This is definitely not everyone's cup of tea.

The Way of the Demiurge - The Ark of the Soul

Charlottess

Liked by 1 people

LIKE

Replies1

Charlottess
CharlottessAuthorCharlottess

Manual translation. I can do a high-quality translation from English to Russian. But on the contrary, I have problems. My English level is B1. Russian is C2.