Mithren
Just a reader of novels though I'm now also trying to write...
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well after hundreds of years nature would have processed all that. it's essentially a cave at this point
time travel is vastly different than transmigrating... but who knows this time maybe it's actually time travel
Matchmaking... highly qualified female teacher/artist. I wonder what he might be missing
I don't speak that language. Please be respectful enough to reply in the same language.
Smoking is stupid."Smoking for fun" indicates a severe ignorance or stupidity.
I thought there were three skid marks and only two checked... maybe I missed something
lol. -2
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That herb selling kid would be a good choice. Sure he'll have to wait for a return on investment but it's a good choice
missing a word here
A price of tokens. Does this mean it's a talent he can buy and then sell?
My comment is still valid regardless of the points you put forth. It is redundant. Efforts to clean up, proof read, and otherwise improve the presentation of the story makes the read more enjoyable for the readers and helps the story do well. I however wonder if you're possibly an internet troll as you've kindly demanded that I "sush up" and otherwise attempted to invalidate my opinion. Should you be a troll I ask you attack with great creativity and fever as I'm a bit bored and welcome the distraction. In the off chance you truly meant no offense I'm game for civil discourse
That's true when walking. The author has it running. A bears hips and supporting musculature are not designed for bipedal movement and thus makes such movement clumsy and less powerful.
The guy did end up following up with a comment that he was trying to do sarcasm and meant nothing negative. I think he was aiming for funny/sarcastic but missed the mark. But yeah. Many people seem too eager to make their 'bit' that they fail to take the time to think things all the way through. I myself am occasionally guilty of this as well even though I try to avoid doing so.
bears can't run on two legs
it can't run with two limbs
Math isn't 'that' difficult
Eagle's don't hunt at night. Owls do
So at most an hour a day. Seems too limited to me but does give room to grow
I dislike that. In my opinion it'd be better if he actually charged it. like through physical contact or with some kind of cost