Me right now:

Forgot to post this on the Patreon. Should probably do that.

I Am Become Death Or I Am The End

With her Cage Devil Fruit she could be the Jailer of the crew, leaving her in charge of the Brig. Eventually her Devil Fruit could have properties similar to that of Sea Stone and weaken all Devil Fruit users when it’s on them, but similarly it could possibly weaken Haki or Magic. Maybe it could even leave a small prison inside of her the same as Bege and his Castle Fruit.

Man. China is seriously laying it on thick with the so called “Rightousness” of China and the “Evilness” of Japan.

You can make Sand Soldiers… Kinda like how Esdeath makes Ice Soldiers. Or Biscuit and how he uses his Devil Fruit. She is a Princess, what kind of Princess doesn’t have an army at her beck and call?

…Did he forge the conversation with Rifan? Rifan told him and the Five Elders that it doesn not matter to him whether or not he becomes a Warlord. If he does, good. If not, who cares.

With the Heal Skill to transform people, you might not need this. But this can be considered the ULTIMATE version of that skill. To distort and manipulate another person’s Soul as opposed to their body alone. Basically you can just have him study on how Souls work and then make him have the idea to figure out how to manipulate and control them, he fails to control but figures out how to mold the soul and therefore the body of the person.

Instead of making a medicine that directly increases Magic power, why not make one that accelerates the growth of magic power? In the time it takes for an ordinary person to gain 100 stat points in MP it would increase the MC’s by 1,000 or more. A 10x multiplier.

Can you perhaps reupload the old version incase we want to reread it? Just upload it under another name so we can get it through your profile.

With having died… you’d think there would be a little.

You better choose this option. Otherwise it gonna be a bit generic and uninspired. You gotta have plots that separate yourself from the rest. Maybe then you will stand out. That is how you make it big. -loads of chapters -a unique story -lots of things people recognize -consistency That’s how you make it here in Fanfiction. I did 2/4 and did decent but I could’ve done better.

Hey. That’s me! :D

They’ll never see it coming.

Like the story so far. A little unique and of course the 18+ area is nice. I went ahead and subbed on Patreon. Good luck on the paths of an author. Now excuse me while I enjoy this Fanfiction.

… Wow. The chapters are long! I’m liking the story so far and I’m just waiting for more chapters to release. Can’t wait! :)

I train in the way of the sword… because I want to do so. I have no need to train or practice in any capacity other than because I feel like it. Will I become a sword master? Perhaps. Will I be sad if I do not achieve it? No. Will I continue to live my life the way I see fit? Yes.

As a Texan… all I can say is this… I want to eat some deep fried alligator.🐊

Thanks for remaking the chapter… has to repost my comment. ——- Or so she thinks, Goa kingdom wouldn't let some no name bounty hunter into their city that only houses the most finely raised nobles and richest merchants in all of the east blue. Those guys will most likely attempt to enslave her the same as those mountain bandits. But I can still see Chun-Li joining the marines. Or at the very least trying to join them. Then after she realizes that they are just dogs of the Celestial Drafons she will up and leave or try and take over the Marines so that she can help them Rebel against the World Governent.

Oh boy, Canabalism. Quite the non heroic trait. Very Anti Hero though