Luffy who fought Arlong was 17, excessively trained in the previous years due to the dream of Pirate King. But due to him underestimating Arlong he was weakened early in the fight giving Arlong a slight advantage. Similarly Arlong had greatly underestimated Luffy and didn’t fight at his full strength, we also have to account for the fact that Arlong had been in the peaceful East Blue for many years by then and had considerably weakened due to his lack of training and fighting his mentality also greatly fell as he had relaxed so much in the peacful sea having not to worry about strong opponents or natural disasters caused on the Grand Line. Arlong when he first came to Cocoyashi village was in fact stronger than his future self, especially if he is still on edge after having been just released from Impel Down.

Well, huh-

He did the thing!

Alrighty. I’ll be straight and honest. This is just a pile of garbage made by some nobody loser in China. They clearly only skimmed through Naruto and don’t actually know anything about it in truth. So many things the main character has said prove they don’t know anything about Naruto. Hiruzen a good guy? No he isn’t, it’s very clear that he has pushed the village to the brink and the effects his actions had still last even after his death. Danzo being a fool? Kinda, but he is also one to know when something is important. But he also has a backbone at the weirdest times. Itachi a family murderer? True. But he is truly just a child that was fooled by Hiruzen. The villagers came to the conclusion that Naruto was associated with the Nine Tails? Nah, it’s very clear that more than likely it was the Root that made it public knowledge. Same with the failure of Sakumo. The Uchiha Clan chose not to interfere with the Nine Tails attack? False. Danzo stopped them and prevented their assistance. Fugaku was swayed by the “Hawk” faction of the clan? No. Until the very end, Fugaku was against the Coup. He knew that the clan was digging their own grave with it. Also, the ramen stall was supposedly filled to the brim with customers… no? It’s usually empty for the most part, that’s why it too Teuchi so many years to open up a real restaurant. Is it also weird that I don’t like the measurement system? No? Good, cause it’s bad. The system isn’t realy explained on how it works or how the system measures things so you are left guessing. With how much the MC props up the third Hokage on a pedestal you can feel how much he is trying to insinuate that Hiruzen represents the leader of China or something. Kinda annoying.

Hey Author (of this Fanfiction) Would you mind if I used your Fanfiction as a basis of my own? I mean, I’d like to rewrite some of this story and basically use it as the main inspiration for a Fanfiction I was thinking of writing. (It basically almost the exact same as your own, just expanded upon and rewritten in some areas. I also have some of it planned out in my head to be much longer than what you wrote) I’m asking this because I like the idea that you went with and I wanted to make it but also head in a different direction with it. Also, this is for if I ever decided to actually sit down and begin writing it. :D Thanks for reading this!

…Didn’t this guy want a harem? Did he forget about Uta? Also, Kuina was never sick. She fell down some stairs when putting away her father’s sword and died. The sick girl he’s thinking of might be Kaya. But she was being poisoned by Kuro and not really sick.

Aright. Let me be blunt. It’s an ok fanfiction. Nothing outstanding. The system? Basic. Mihawk Template, not taken seriously as the author doesn’t understand Mohawk’s strength entirely. (To be fair, nobody does, but he is seen as weak in this Fanfiction) I can look past a lot of things, don’t get me wrong. But what let’s me realy know that the author doesn’t know anything about Naruto is when the Chunin exams come up and the author goes. (MC is in a team of five, the Chunin Exam time was pushed forward, the first exam is an actual written test and not an “Information Gathering” exam as it’s portrayed in the original work) After that I couldn’t bring myself to read anymore. So yeah. 3/5 It’s okay. But I won’t recommend it.

Wasn’t the “real” Squard killed when Rob found Toki? You know, turned into glass by his lightning that created the ring of hell island?

Paul right now: “He really is my son.”

And he never will be, the Black Bulls base is being controlled with magic. :)

At this point, someone who took the art of being a Ninja seriosuly would have retreated and laid in wait. Humans are animals of endurance, whittle away the enemy forces a little at a time. Never let them sleep or rest. Drive them mad and kill them at their weakest. Just a little bit of work at a time is more than enough to kill any population.

… I too once held the ideal to add to the RWBY Fanfiction here on WebNovel. I failed. Good luck my friend.

Me right now:

Forgot to post this on the Patreon. Should probably do that.

I Am Become Death Or I Am The End

With her Cage Devil Fruit she could be the Jailer of the crew, leaving her in charge of the Brig. Eventually her Devil Fruit could have properties similar to that of Sea Stone and weaken all Devil Fruit users when it’s on them, but similarly it could possibly weaken Haki or Magic. Maybe it could even leave a small prison inside of her the same as Bege and his Castle Fruit.

Man. China is seriously laying it on thick with the so called “Rightousness” of China and the “Evilness” of Japan.

You can make Sand Soldiers… Kinda like how Esdeath makes Ice Soldiers. Or Biscuit and how he uses his Devil Fruit. She is a Princess, what kind of Princess doesn’t have an army at her beck and call?

…Did he forge the conversation with Rifan? Rifan told him and the Five Elders that it doesn not matter to him whether or not he becomes a Warlord. If he does, good. If not, who cares.

With the Heal Skill to transform people, you might not need this. But this can be considered the ULTIMATE version of that skill. To distort and manipulate another person’s Soul as opposed to their body alone. Basically you can just have him study on how Souls work and then make him have the idea to figure out how to manipulate and control them, he fails to control but figures out how to mold the soul and therefore the body of the person.