The story itself may be decent, but I can't tell, because the translation is absolute garbage. Definitely MTL tier. I also don't understand why so many authors feel the need to make the world of Pokémon edgy.

I don't get why so many authors have to put their own spin on the cultivation in xianxia novels. Just stick with Qi, instead of making things confusing, by using Quarks or whatever.

It's actually impressive how the author managed to write a MC this unlikable...

Really misleading summary. I expected a fic with Severus Snape as the MC, instead I got a female MC.

Thanks for the warning. It's always frustrating when authors keep filling their novels with racism, thinly disguised as nationalism.Fantasy authors should keep their writing separate from real world politics.

Don't use an English title, if the story isn't in English .

It seems like webnovel deleted the line breaks in my review...One more reason why I dislike this app.

Quite disappointing.It started out promising, but quickly devolved, when the author convoluted Luffy's fighting style, by giving him a naginata (or rather the Chinese equivalent) as a weapon (and later a second one), instead of keeping him a hand-to-hand fighter.The MC is also extremely annoying: He feels like a cross between being a horny, wannabe 'alpha-male' and an edgy meme-lord. He blatantly stares at Nami's breasts and makes fun of her for being flat, because she's not as big as her post-timeskip self. He's also spouting references nobody will understand, that only serve to make him look like a weirdo.It's especially disappointing, because he started off tolerable.The story is also filled with a lot of very obvious grammatical errors and spelling mistakes.The spelling mistakes in particular just make the author look lazy and uncaring, because any spell-check would've caught them. This means the author could've easily fixed them before posting the chapter, but didn't bother.

.....Yeah, I think I'll drop this now...Seriously, acting like some edgy meme-lord and spouting references nobody's going to get, is just going to make people think you're some creepy weirdo.

Lol it's not mentioned anywhere in the synopsis, that it's a M&B story...

The MC is actually ret*rded...How can you not figure out that you ran into the danger zone at this point!?

I never would've guessed!Thank you, Captain Obvious...

Has he forgotten about Chopper ?

Seriously? Even if you want to conquer their the world, there's no need to destroy the village full of innocent civilians...

"Three words"? I guess this line only works properly in Chinese...

I'm not really a fan of wattpad, so I'll check it out on ff.

💀 Jesus Christ, that's f*cked up...

I read up to chapter 20. After that I no longer had the energy to read a story I didn't enjoy.

Lol, Naruto is one of the worst fathers. He put his work before his family, even though he knows how painful it is to be alone. He even sent a Shadow Clone to attend his daughter's birthday party. A freaking SHADOW CLONE! That's honestly more insulting than not showing up at all. He's also a moron, because he could've just used Shadow Clones to do his work faster, which would've given him more time for his family...

The strongest illusion should be either Infinite Tsukuyomi, Izanagi/Izanami or Kotoamatsukami. The afterimage clone is more speed based.