Review Detail of Alchemist in One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

Quite disappointing.It started out promising, but quickly devolved, when the author convoluted Luffy's fighting style, by giving him a naginata (or rather the Chinese equivalent) as a weapon (and later a second one), instead of keeping him a hand-to-hand fighter.The MC is also extremely annoying: He feels like a cross between being a horny, wannabe 'alpha-male' and an edgy meme-lord. He blatantly stares at Nami's breasts and makes fun of her for being flat, because she's not as big as her post-timeskip self. He's also spouting references nobody will understand, that only serve to make him look like a weirdo.It's especially disappointing, because he started off tolerable.The story is also filled with a lot of very obvious grammatical errors and spelling mistakes.The spelling mistakes in particular just make the author look lazy and uncaring, because any spell-check would've caught them. This means the author could've easily fixed them before posting the chapter, but didn't bother.