Filler chapter

8 things that make me uncomfortable about the novel so far in these 40 chapters I've read: 01- The focus at the beginning of the novel was mainly on the degree of the MC's talent. The more the MC learned about his element, the more his talent would develop. The author simply didn't talk about this important aspect of MC development anymore. 02- The author does not adequately explain the reason why the MC acquired his second affinity, and also did not talk more about this development. 03. Still on the second affinity, did the MC acquire a cultivation technique for this? 04- It is not clear when or how the MC may acquire new affinities. 05- The MC may seem like a genius, but it is absolutely against common sense for the MC to stay a year at the academy and only on the eve of a mission he decides to learn movement, battle and weapons techniques. Sorry but this looks like a giant BS! 06- In what did the instructors help the MC? 07- The space of chaos seems to be absolutely underused and even sometimes unnecessary for the development of the MC. 08 - I still perceive the development of the MC's character to be very superficial. It appears that the MC is a talented mama's boy who overcame the bulling when he awakened his element. Sorry for my poor English.

Xietian a good author! However, the author's BS this time was amazing. The hero that killed a level 160 with one punch is now unable to kill a newly promoted 3rd order. lol golden BS!

Xietian a good author! However, many parts of the story require refinement and greater attention from the author. Bai Zemin goes to another world and kills a level 160 Asura with just one punch. He can kill with some difficulty a level 181 mage/warrior who is super experienced in battle. But, Bai Zemim has a hard time killing a newly promoted zombie to the 3rd rank. The author tries to argue that Bai Zemin is holding back for fear of destroying the bridge. A rough argument! After all, whoever kills a level 160 with one punch would more easily kill a level 100 enemy (60 levels lower) more easily.

Xietian a good author! However, many parts of the story require refinement and greater attention from the author. Bai Zemin goes to another world and kills a level 160 Asura with just one punch. He can kill with some difficulty a level 181 mage/warrior who is super experienced in battle. But, Bai Zemim has a hard time killing a newly promoted zombie to the 3rd rank. The author tries to argue that Bai Zemin is holding back for fear of destroying the bridge. A rough argument! After all, whoever kills a level 160 with one punch would more easily kill a level 100 enemy (60 levels lower) more easily.

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short chapter!

This novel is very good, it's an annoying flaw that the chapters are too short. In good novels the chapters are usually about 2-3 times longer.

When you think it started, puuff, it's over !! All chapters are like that, too short !!!

Thanks for the chapter! But, unfortunately, the chapters have been very short.

Thanks for the chapter! But, it would be more interesting if the chapters were bigger! The chapters are too short !!

Oh my... Very short chapters!!!

Very short chapters!!

Very short chapters!!!

Thanks!!! I think the chapters have been very short!

I laughed a lot with this chapter!😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂