The author kills mob characters ( hydra agents ) but saves recurring villains ( the lizard ).

This novel is a copy paste of Martial World. Instead of cultivators his using mages. And he change the lotus for the cube. No very original.

You got the rank of James Rhodes wrong. he is a lieutenant colonel not a general lol

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You lack 90 days of basic training, MCT, and at least 3.5 years of fleet service to understand the difference between a soldier and a marine.

Please when using my beloved Corps logo. Don’t mentioned the word soldiers. We are marines for Christ sakes.

Francesca

Plot holes Hogwarts letter- full name House sorting - full name Profesor call students formally by their last name so I think by this point his last name shouldn’t be such mystery. Is funny how the whole castle already knows his last name but the main character continues to be delusional about it.

Fun fact marines don’t like to be call soldiers. soyou can add A retort to the chapter so the conversation Between jonhson and fraNk is not one sideD. lol

The granmer is above the average in webnovel. The updates are consistent. You charecter needs a lot of work. The charecter acts like a 13 Year old boy. who’s second chance at life did’t tought him anything. The charecter made referances of Mc systems but doesn’t understand why his system has a quirky personality. World building is big part of the story, so, far the setting of your story remains vague. Please go more in detail to understan The circumstances your charecter is under base on the locations he is. and please read a business book. Your charecter setting is a business, your buSiness Sense sucks, honestly.

Mecha friza and cooler make a comeback then future bulla or gohan slice them up. Later get revive and obtin golden transfrmation.