never mind i oversaw the dense tag. sorry

the story concept is interresting, the world around it could use some more work, the romance ... are man really this dense? or did i just oversee the dense protadonist tag? the romance also makes me feel like the mc is somehow gay or stuck at the age of 10 mentally. even the children have more EQ then him. just looking at his dungeon name. how can he not relayse till now what a morningwood is?? leaves me with the question: what did he do at school, because in todays society even they know. sadly the only thing keeping me going for now was the interesting farming concept. to the autor, don't let my critice put you down. i belive with more work you will surly get better over time. just use the readers view to better yourself, every start is hard. but also do not allow everything we write to you, its your story and your idea. put warning in the prologe this way no one can complaine to you later for ignoring them. best wishes and continue writing ps english is not my native languagr so please excuse the mistakes. thanks

agreed. and wasn't ash going to lose to the trainer of blaseken in this on anyways? vidal should just be the trainer who wins against him.

haitus?

every autor who i had the misfortune of reading there great fanfictions stopped writing after that note 😭 please don't add to my counts

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