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commander_pride_211dCommentedalso notice how He missed up dragon name exactly like the one piece Chinese fanfics messes up the characters names.
"Monkey D. Luffy, the grandson of Garp, son of Drogue, this entire family spells trouble to us." Commented the bald elder with a big mustache.- commander_pride_211dCommented
yeah. this looks more and more like a translation and not an original. what's more, notice how the decisions that MC makes. he doesn't enter wano. he doesn't call the five elders by their names even though they were revealed and doesn't adress them as part of celestial dragons which has been confirmed they are. he also doesn't change most events as if he wants to stay as close as possible to the cannon events. I bet this is a translation of some novel that was around before Wano ended (or still in the middle of act 2 or beginning of act 3) and that's why mc doesn't address the information that came after it like how pluton is in wano or how luffy has the nika fruit.
"Monkey D. Luffy, the grandson of Garp, son of Drogue, this entire family spells trouble to us." Commented the bald elder with a big mustache. - commander_pride_214dCommentedCh 22 SanctuarydetailBetween Heaven and Earth, I Alone Am The One Squished Between SoftiesAnime & Comics · Yuri_Lover23
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tell me this is chatgpt without telling le uts chatgpt
As I absorb the reality of my perfect teeth, I can't help but appreciate the intricacies of this transformed existence, where even the smallest details carry a profound impact on the canvas of my redefined life. - commander_pride_2123dCommented
the strongest wizard of modern age
My father had ruffled my hair and smiled down at me and told me it was only natural since every boy dreamed of being the strongest at least once in their life. - commander_pride_2125dCommentedI stick my right hand out and before I could even say anything, the broom shoots up to my hand. '*sighs* Sometimes my genius scares me.'
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red and bule. hollow purple
Riddle was screaming in Parseltongue when it noticed him running towards him. Immidately it started red and blue spells towards him. Ronan started deflecting the spells right and left with ease, he could tell that Riddle was getting stronger as time passed by. But it didnt matter to him. He felt elated that he got to fight the being who defeated him. He could get his revenge now, and he was all for that… - commander_pride_2130dCommentedCh 57 Chapter-57: A big Fucking Snake-1
- commander_pride_211mthCommented"More people!, David Wallace, pleasure to meet you," a cheerful man said as we got out of the car, approaching to introduce himself.
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big mom, oden, Whitebeard, probably roger too and many more humans are considered superhuman. I mean each one of them was born a monster and then trained and became a bigger monster
The only Exceptional human probably is Yoriichi in this world because he is just a natural-born superhuman who can run in the desert for days before getting actually tired - commander_pride_211mthCommented
honeslty, MC is pretty useless. He's letting everything happen just like in cannon. what's the point of having your main character start in the past if He's not going to do anything. Plus, in the last few chapters, he became basically a lap dog for the world government. I wonder he even has conquerors Haki and he can't move against the elders at all
Ch 98 Zed's Incident - commander_pride_211mthCommented
Even in fanfics, gege still finds a way to keep sukuna alive.
One doesn't need to be a genius to know that the soul of the king of frauds himself is inches from my own. - commander_pride_211mthCommentedCh 9 Capture
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rood vs the other guy hhh
On an uninhabited, medium-sized island. Two pirate groups were rushing towards each other, like winning was their only goal. - commander_pride_211mthCommented
roger died 1t year 1500 so he's right
'In one piece world, now is 1500, the Pirate King's execution time. As the captain of this pirate group, my strength is not enough. Although I am good at Sabre and Gun, in one piece, there are a lot of swordsmen out there who can slice me in half.' - commander_pride_211mthCommented"Who are you?" Brontes asked, looking at the prisoner with genuine curiosity.
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what about the jade emperor?
Although Taiyi Supreme God is not well-known in folk tales, it is the most important god in China, unsurpassed, since even Buddha and the Three Purities were not worshiped by all emperors. - commander_pride_211mthCommented
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