Reviews of Yeetd
Yeetd
Madyan_wani
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5/5 ((ΦωΦ)) This is a good read, the story is interesting! ヾ(*ΦωΦ)ﾉ I love how the author introduces the characters (๑ↀᆺↀ๑)✧ Also, the pacing and sequence of events are natural <(*ΦωΦ*)> Keep up the good work, author! (ΦωΦσ)σ
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To the readers, IF you are looking for a vampire-werewolf novel with the touch of high school drama? This story is just for you! If you're up for an extremely entertaining novel packed with hot werewolves and vampires, this is your go-to novel! Ps. I read the first chapter and it's really nice to read. Lots of love, Poisonlily
Pretty interesting story and I think the plot is pretty good, but there is a whole lot of tell and not show. I don't really know what any of them look like, and sometimes the storytelling can be a little confusing. I think the background info is really good, and this novel has a lot of potential to be really good!
Brutal Mode Engaged Starting a story is easy! Just drown introduce 10 characters in the first three chapters without describing what one of them looks like. Ryan, Kael, Alvin, King Charles, Nancy, Alovia, Nita, Sasha is a sample of the characters introduced. . Originality - 2/5 - Werewolves who live on Crividia or is it Krividia and why is it referred to as a planet? Is there another planet? And if so why is it only 10,000 miles. What city on this planet do they live? what country? What does it look like? Do they even have grass? Oh dont worry about what it smells like. Or if its cold. Or what sounds there are. I'd just be happy to know what anything looks like. . Storytelling- 0/5 . But why am I reading pure TELL. There is barely anything shown. Im told how they got from a to be. Told how they feel. Told what they're thinking. Told that they were shouting. Told they were giving flowers. And best of all I was told that the Palace was decorated ... wait for it... not with flowers, not with beautiful decorations draping against columns of marble, not with cauldrons of burning blue fire... .no no with BIRTHDAY CARDS. wtf? And I dont even know what the birthday cards which enchanted everyone look like. Oh and then I was told people from other clans come to look at the beautiful birthday cards. . Characters - 2/5 Off to a great start Alvin smirks. Okay he's a smartass. Ryan "Yeah, the species that got to extinction" okay Ryan is challenged. King Charles - 0 personality. He's just a King placeholder. It was really difficult to work out if Nancy or Alovia had any personality. they are interchangeable and its all tell. Introducing so many characters so quickly without describing them or establishing any sort of personality just makes them a list of names to me. . BTW - When does the storytelling start?
I thought It was a Twilight Series at the beginning. Vampires... Werewolves... This genre was a tough one for me, but I finished it. The author's writing pace is quite good. The story was neither slow nor fast, so it was easy to read even to an Eastern Fantasy freak like me. This is a worthy 5 stars work. An honest review from a fellow writer here showing some support. Do keep up the good work, keep your imagination run wild, and wish you all the best for WSA. This is Senior. Senior Yang. And you readers reading my comment, remember to support my work too while you're reading this review. Hahaha!
Everyone regular reader of Ms. author knows that I need no justifications for my claim that every single piece of fantasy romance and artful stories by the author is just MARVELLOUS...... Such wonderful books released by her she continues to show her skill to her readers and she will never disappoint.....I Guarantee it!!
Wowww..A very well thought out story, I can see that author has put real efforts after reading the current chapters, World background is interesting and story development is simply awesome along Good character design... The writing can be done better but since Author's first language is not English ( just like me ) so it's ok ( since Im also noob, I don't have right to say this lol ) The story starts with multiple character and and adventure with Princes and princesses of Vampire, Wolf, Dragon, witches, demon and other races so it's bound to be interesting and exciting with the adventure and when u add Royal romance into it, Along with curse(real witch curse) , Fate and... love. what else do you need? Go read chapters and stop reading review lol.
