White Divine Crane
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Interesting Story at first, but its butchered in the last 100-200 chapters. Everything doesn't make much sense anymore and is incredibly rushed. The worst is the ending, at the chapter before he is shopping and the next chapter is the ending which is just a summary of some events which could have potentially be at least 100-200 more chapters.
Dropped chapter 576. The novel was good up to around chapter 400, then everything falls apart. The whole world revolves around going through multiple simulations and how the MC fights his way against fate. But basically the entire novel after chapter 400 is ONE WORLD. I’ve already read almost 200 chapters of this one world and based on the chapter titles it’s going to last for at least another 100+ chapters. Plus in this world the whole system of having the gem reminders or his cheat are all out the window, so it’s like a completely different story where he’s just flailing around faced with tons of undefeatable enemies. Not fun.
the story definitely has its fun fantasy points but the main issue in my eyes it the translation and lack of editing. When I say this I mean the number in one paragraph will be 5 million, and then 2 sentences later it's 500 million. makes it a bit tiring to read. there also seems to be a bit of nationalism in the book but since it's fantasy and not on earth I didn't care. it's not worth mentioning compared to some books that seem like propaganda. lasty decent fantasy book leaving it at a 3/5 for now; there is a lot of plot holes yet to be filled so it could be a smartly written conclusion that ties it all together, or it could just wrap it up ignoring those holes, time will tell.
For people who are apparently uneducated if you don't have a certain amount of patriotism then your book isn't allowed to be read...sold? Something like that. Anyway i wanted to say this is an excellent example of a book that gets better as it continues and with multiple updates daily you don't have to wait too long on cliffhangers Thanks author [and translator?]
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe this is good.[img=recommend]
Definitely a recommended read. Hopefully it passes through. The story is interesting and I was able to read without stopping. The premise for the main world is a little confusing right now since there's not much to go on, but the simulation is pretty interesting. People would have to go through simulations and is supposed to either live a good life or defy fate to have a good rating and get rewards, such as wisdom or physique card. The only thing I didn't like so much is that those wisdom and physique card isn't permanent. Not sure if I read it right, but there's only a number of times they can use those cards per simulation. The only weird(but understandable) part for me was how MC suddenly became okay with killing spree, but maybe that's just normal for his situation.