Reviews of When the Reader Descends Into the Novel With a System

This is amazing. The writing style is exactly what I'm used to reading in some of the high-quality fics I read. The world is fleshed out, and the action is written in a way that it isn't a pain to read. This is a rarity, one that I'd gladly recommend to those that might like this kind of writing.

It’s rare to come across such a story like this on the apps. This world is going to explode! It’s brilliant. I was catching myself thinking, “that’s clever” in several situations. The main character seems smart and driven. It’s rare to come across that too. I am thoroughly enjoying my read through and am looking forward to more chapters!! The only critique I have is that the author should trust their readers. They mention severa Author’s Notes(A/N) and it would pull me from the immersion. Explanations when Swapping between characters thoughts or dialogue and explanations of what things means, pulled me from where I’d placed myself. If instead, they explained a little differently in the paragraph, I would like it more.

I really enjoy the world-building. Its clear that you've put a lot of time and effort into it. The story is fun an engaging right off the bat. Reading flows well. It has me looking forward to more, good work. Keep it up. Looking forward to see how the plot turns out

If you haven't read such a novel, that means you are living in complete darkness.I wonder when will there be new updates.