Review Detail of Dehni_Olsen in When the Reader Descends Into the Novel With a System

It’s rare to come across such a story like this on the apps. This world is going to explode! It’s brilliant. I was catching myself thinking, “that’s clever” in several situations. The main character seems smart and driven. It’s rare to come across that too. I am thoroughly enjoying my read through and am looking forward to more chapters!! The only critique I have is that the author should trust their readers. They mention severa Author’s Notes(A/N) and it would pull me from the immersion. Explanations when Swapping between characters thoughts or dialogue and explanations of what things means, pulled me from where I’d placed myself. If instead, they explained a little differently in the paragraph, I would like it more.