Reviews of When I Saw The Returns, I Invested In My Future Wife First
When I Saw The Returns, I Invested In My Future Wife First
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Interesting synopsis, i think this's good novel if there's no harem ........................................................................................................................................
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Honestly it suck, I've read 60ish raw chapter and can just say that author/MC is forcing too much on losing money that it downgrade all the good quality of it's story. I'm not against MC fully using it's system but I think the fact that he needs to "lose" money on his gf so that he can get x100 back is annoying. He doesn't seems to care much about her tbh, he "use" her as cash cow and she fell in love with his "kindness" as for him it's a pretty good deal 'cause she's beautiful, skillful, obedient and many more, anyway I don't rly feel any love from MC or it's not very well pronounced. Later he's just trying to make money (losing) and for that he needs to invest on his GF but her GF is so kind that she try to minimize the lose but he still try even though he gain money by doing business by investing on her. I'm honestly fed up by his greed or what's over. In the end it's a game of who can lose or minimize (and have profit) money. Anyway idea's all right, not very original but still could have been interesting but ended up bad with it's setting like it's system rebate or MC personality.
1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel 1 star the translator remove a lot of scenes from the original novel
Another good novel ruined by trash translator again. If the translator didn’t edit many parts and tried to westernized with no knowledge, the story will be the most interesting one of this year. Please remove the translator, Webnovel. If you use this person again, more good work will be ruined by this person again and again.
This is the type of novel that I never knew I wanted, but once I read it, I fell in love with it. It's cute, adorable, simply fluff and sugar overload. Though, at the same it, it has a good consistent story, with good character planning, in which they feel like 3D characters, instead of some randoms. The jokes in this story are well though out, they are not exactly repetitive and they bring out the personality of the various characters in the novel. I dunno, I just love the story. I recommend giving it a try simply to experience what a well though out sugar overload feels like.
The novel is good, pacing is alright a bit fast but tolerable, grammars good, mc is quite hasty in chapter 1-6 but other than that it's alright. Honestly hope that this would get picked because I don't see much romance novels asides from 99% vr almost real novel, I'm dragon novel, I'm gonna be lazy while getting strong novel and a bunch more thousands of copies. Although reading this might get boring to some but hey that's what fight, kill, offend young master, commit genocide to entire sect novels are for, this novel is kinda like taking a break from all those and once you're tired of those you can again read this while recuperating the weary mind reading the same thousand copies of itself. I'll end my rant here and I hope you guys read this novel and slightly enjoy it.
