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Honestly it suck, I've read 60ish raw chapter and can just say that author/MC is forcing too much on losing money that it downgrade all the good quality of it's story. I'm not against MC fully using it's system but I think the fact that he needs to "lose" money on his gf so that he can get x100 back is annoying. He doesn't seems to care much about her tbh, he "use" her as cash cow and she fell in love with his "kindness" as for him it's a pretty good deal 'cause she's beautiful, skillful, obedient and many more, anyway I don't rly feel any love from MC or it's not very well pronounced. Later he's just trying to make money (losing) and for that he needs to invest on his GF but her GF is so kind that she try to minimize the lose but he still try even though he gain money by doing business by investing on her. I'm honestly fed up by his greed or what's over. In the end it's a game of who can lose or minimize (and have profit) money. Anyway idea's all right, not very original but still could have been interesting but ended up bad with it's setting like it's system rebate or MC personality.
When I Saw The Returns, I Invested In My Future Wife First
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I read forward in you and at some point I think the offer forgot he even had a system cuz unlike other books with a system they're not keeping track of what he's getting back I forgot when I came back to read it what the return was supposed to be because I was sitting here trying to figure out why don't you just invest in the other people that you can also invest in Why are you so focus on investing in her and you just reminded me that the investment was like x100 which has not been brought up in a while because he's been hovering around like 400 million or something for a bit even though he's definitely bought her multiple items and a few buildings that should have had him in the billions by now
Like if you're going to write a greedy character who's doing nothing but making money Make sure that we all believe it because I swear they've reduced the multiplier down to 10 cuz all of a sudden like his money growth has seen to have diminished
Namasaya:I read forward in you and at some point I think the offer forgot he even had a system cuz unlike other books with a system they're not keeping track of what he's getting back I forgot when I came back to read it what the return was supposed to be because I was sitting here trying to figure out why don't you just invest in the other people that you can also invest in Why are you so focus on investing in her and you just reminded me that the investment was like x100 which has not been brought up in a while because he's been hovering around like 400 million or something for a bit even though he's definitely bought her multiple items and a few buildings that should have had him in the billions by now