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When Blood Runs Cold

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Nightsummer20
Nightsummer20Lv12Nightsummer20

A story with a perfect balance between Vampires and Romance. The author has done a great job in the world-building as well as in the character's design. The chapters are long and the writing quality is great. I'm a huge fan of Vampire Romance and this story definitely did not disappoint me. So far, the plotline is great and interesting. Great work dear author!💜

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midnight_bloom
midnight_bloomLv13midnight_bloom

Writing style is so poetic. I love how the prologue is written. For a moment it felt like it's turning into a purple prose but it did not happen (which is good, in my opinion). I like how the FL's character is designed. I haven't been deep enough to know the ML but I am sure it will be awesome when they meet because the intro was so grand. I Keep on writing author. All the best.

NakedApron
NakedApronLv3NakedApron

Writing Quality - Aside from the few clunky sentences here and there, this novel is super clean. Not just clean, the prologue and the ensuing chapters were the most poetic shit I've read on the site. And I'm also very jealous of your ability to write in italic. Character. The MC's traits and interests are super well defined, which really helps the reader understand the things that are happening in the story. There's nothing that feels confusing, but at the same time, I feel that it makes it a bit hard to feel interest for the character (this is completely my personal opinion, pls don't kill me) The same thing for Worldbuilding. There's a lot of exposition, which is really helps me to learn about your world, but I find myself struggling to be really interested in the world, you know? (again, personal pref.) (also, it's prob bad advice, since a lot of readers on the site are teens-young adults, and they usually have very little patience for things.) Story development. Nice pace, good descriptions. Very epic. Summary: There's a lot of work done on the characters and details, especially the flair, so naturally this deserves a big 5 star

silent_walker
silent_walkerLv3silent_walker

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Harlos
HarlosLv2Harlos

The first few chapters alone feel like an upcoming epos about angels vs vampires. I just read through the first chapters so far. The writing quality is really good and descriptive where it needs to be. I'm not a huge fan of fantasy romance tbh but this one has the skills to keep me reading it

Mineva
MinevaLv14Mineva

This is amazing. I've always loved vampire novels but one thing that turned me off from them is their tendency to overly rely on tropes. "When Blood Runs Cold" is a different story though as the author has the ability to make you care about the characters. It does take a while to like any of them but you will root for them eventually. I also like the thought that was put into the construction/development of this novel and I really am looking forward to more! Cheers and good luck!

kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3kuhaku_sora

I can finally say this out loud. THIS IS A BETTER LOVE STORY THAN TWILIGHT. WHERE SHOULD I EVEN BEGIN! kidding aside, I love how the way you depicted things in your novel. There are some grammatical errors. But, you know what they say, a good story covers that up. You could always edit them right after! I love the witty reactions of the queen! As well as your book cover too! It looks amazing. Frigthening, even; if i must say. I invite all people to read this novel! Come on, lads! Give this a chance! Ya'll missing out~

debby22
debby22Lv4debby22

WowđŸ˜±đŸ˜±đŸ˜± This book is so freakishly awesome. I personally am not a fan of vampires because I'm a bit too squeamish but this book is just captivating . Somehow, I wasn't able to detect a grammatical error that breaks the flow. This is quite a feat. Good work author.

calfikydra
calfikydraLv10calfikydra

Not gonna lie, this is fucking incredible! The writings skills that this author beholds - phew. I am left speechless, after reading only 4 chapters. I don't have a membership (yet, but this book might change my mind), but if i did, i would devour this book within a few days, lol. Congratulations, you did a wonderful job author! I am speechless <3

Roxanne_Woods
Roxanne_WoodsLv14Roxanne_Woods

This story is... amazing. Usually, I tend to stay very far from vampire stories as it often fall into the trap of clichĂ©s. The author avoids it here and the result is positively mind-blowing. Putting aside the nature of the characters, they feel real. They are neither perfect nor evil, just a mix of everything in between. They live, they hope, they feel. I especially love the author's description. More than beautiful, they have that little extra thing that leave the readers in awe with a perfect picture in their mind. Congratulation to the author for writing such such good book and thanks for sharing it with us 😊

VPNightshade_36
VPNightshade_36Lv12VPNightshade_36

The is one of the most well-written books on this platform. The chapters are very descriptive and you can actually imagine being in the scene with the characters. Very interesting perspective on both Vampires and Angels. Book reads at a good pace, not too slow or fast and keeps your attention throughout. A really good read!!!

AerialClove
AerialCloveLv2AerialClove

Great book, very detailed and easy to read, it has a nice plot and each chapter leaves you wanting for more, thumbs up to wolfgirl you did a wonderful job

Cher_Yan
Cher_YanLv1Cher_Yan

Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✹I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❀❀❀ https://www.webnovel.com/book/under-her-skin_19361304406259705

JohnoTheGreat
JohnoTheGreatLv1JohnoTheGreat

It's impressive as much as the book and story isn't what I read, I still found a way to enjoy it even if it wasn't quite the type of story I enjoy. Well written and enjoyable.

CodeyVanilla
CodeyVanillaLv10CodeyVanilla

A job well done. This is my kind of book; a book that leaves you wanting more and makes you forget the surrounding world. The author is really talented . Welldone and keep up the good work â˜șâ˜ș

xiaohai_23
xiaohai_23Lv11xiaohai_23

The first chapter (actually, the prologue) is hooking. You see the mc further in the story, and what you read makes you want to reach that point of the plot sooner. Then, you're bounced back to the beginning, and you start knowing some characters, including the mc that dreams about leaving her city to hunt vampires. Enemies-turn-lovers stories have always appeal, but now I'm curious to see how an angel and a vampire can fall in love

Adwaid_Nambiar
Adwaid_NambiarLv1Adwaid_Nambiar

Not gonna lie, I am not really a fan of romance novels, in fact I avoid them most of the time as I feel the repetition f same plots. But this one actually has some really great story. I am really enjoying reading it! The writing is certainly great. And characters are really well versed, each having a personality in a way that differentiating becomes easy. I haven't been able to finish it yet but I am really intrigued to find out what I am going to find out. And just so that, I make myself completely clear, I AM LOVING IT!!

KIRAN
KIRANLv4KIRAN

A good novel to read...unusual plot twists...detailed background and character design is very good...with stable updates and good writing quality and no grammatical mistakes this makes a good Fantasy-Romance novel...Looking forward for more chapters...

Primate
PrimateLv4Primate

Quality: Top notch. No noticeable errors that could affect the flow of the story. Update: No fault at all. The author is doing a great job. Story: Right from the introduction, the novel progresses without deviating from the main plot. Characters: Well designed and thought out. Especially the MC. World: The setting of the world is very good. The author greatly mapped the world designs. Characters, ways of life etc. Overall: A great novel.

EternalNightLotus
EternalNightLotusLv11EternalNightLotus

I like that its not cringy. We all know enough about vampires so the genre isn't exactly new - and god knows we've had enough of twilight vampire cliches. But what's unique here is the writers mastery of words. You could spell vampire a million different ways and still not capture the mystery and danger of the creature the way the author has. The writing is poetic and the narrative and descriptions are vivid enough to imagine. A minor complaint, I would like to see the queen do more, she sort of has no role after the first few chapters where she made a strong appearance. After that we don't really see her do much of anything but maybe that changes later. Other than that, its a pretty good read