Review Detail of NakedApron in When Blood Runs Cold

Writing Quality - Aside from the few clunky sentences here and there, this novel is super clean. Not just clean, the prologue and the ensuing chapters were the most poetic shit I've read on the site. And I'm also very jealous of your ability to write in italic. Character. The MC's traits and interests are super well defined, which really helps the reader understand the things that are happening in the story. There's nothing that feels confusing, but at the same time, I feel that it makes it a bit hard to feel interest for the character (this is completely my personal opinion, pls don't kill me) The same thing for Worldbuilding. There's a lot of exposition, which is really helps me to learn about your world, but I find myself struggling to be really interested in the world, you know? (again, personal pref.) (also, it's prob bad advice, since a lot of readers on the site are teens-young adults, and they usually have very little patience for things.) Story development. Nice pace, good descriptions. Very epic. Summary: There's a lot of work done on the characters and details, especially the flair, so naturally this deserves a big 5 star