Reviews of What?! The gamemaster and the top player are dating?! [BL]
What?! The gamemaster and the top player are dating?! [BL]
cherlyswan
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been following this book for over 60 chapters. I remember leaving a review before this but I thought I should do it again cause I love this book so much. It keeps getting better and better. My favorite character is Li Ling. great work author, you have a bright future in fantasy world writing. thank you so much for this awesome book.
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To be honest... BT and fantasy is not "my cup of coffe", but... I like the way you write abot the gaming. It is very illustrative. The storyline is interesting and keeps the readers attention. That's what writing novels are about - keeping readers attention to the end :) so you're doing very well. Wish you inspiration and a lot of good ideas!
I love it! This novel is just the read I was looking for, such well thought out concept! I love gaming plots so much after reading TKA and especially when reading National school prince is a girl! Now regarding the style and plot construction, they are pretty finely executed. The novel has a descriptively tailored concept tallying to romance, fluffs humour, mystery and gaming. The interlinking of relationships followed by varying sequence of events are put together skillfully. Good job author!
I love BL, so that automatically pulled me into the story. The story is interesting and your wordbuilding and pacing is good; keep up with the pace you are at. You have a few grammar mistakes with punctuations and capitalization; easily fixable when you go back and reread it. And maybe break up some of your long paragraphs. Keep up the good work!
Ah, this story was unexpectedly wonderful. The characters are well developed and consistent, and the ending is fulfilling, mostly... now I need to read the spin off to find out the rest, which is fine. If it's anything like this one, it will be worth the read. Thank you for a great story and wonderful commentary at the chapter ends.
