Review Detail of Melite in What?! The gamemaster and the top player are dating?! [BL]

Ah, this story was unexpectedly wonderful. The characters are well developed and consistent, and the ending is fulfilling, mostly... now I need to read the spin off to find out the rest, which is fine. If it's anything like this one, it will be worth the read. Thank you for a great story and wonderful commentary at the chapter ends.