XOMatsumaeohana
Overall, an interesting read, and that's just the first chapter. What starts out as a murder mystery for me may just turn into something else entirely if the synopsis has anything to say about it. I'm certainly looking forward to learning more about Setsura-chan. There are a few grammar issues that need to be fixed. However, these aren't glaring enough that it should be priority. The story flows smoothly despite it. Looking forward to reading more of this story. Great job!
I don't know what to say but this story certainly stands out amongst those typical transmigration/reincarnation stories. Perhaps because this is in a Japanese setting, but it's very different. As of chapter 29, bits and pieces of the case are coming along. Nothing major yet, I want to see how Setsura proves herself as the key to all of this mess.
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The setting is set in Japan and most of the characters have Japanese names. The writing was smooth and it was easy to imagine the characters from the descriptive introductions. Time travelling elements puts the main character visiting the past. This story centres mostly around romance and the mystery of the murder. It is a promising plot and I've always liked the Japanese culture. So reading it was a great change compared to the usual genres on WebNovel :)
I really liked the entire atmosphere that you set up! Immediately, I was transported into the world that you had created, one filled with mystery and sort of a hidden defiance? I can't state enough how glad I am that your story doesn't just jump to another era and have trigger a series of illogical events or anything. Not sure how the mystery will go at this point, but I added it to my library ^-^ Will definitely try to piece it together when I have more time!