Review Detail of GD_Cruz in We Will Meet Again

Overall, an interesting read, and that's just the first chapter. What starts out as a murder mystery for me may just turn into something else entirely if the synopsis has anything to say about it. I'm certainly looking forward to learning more about Setsura-chan. There are a few grammar issues that need to be fixed. However, these aren't glaring enough that it should be priority. The story flows smoothly despite it. Looking forward to reading more of this story. Great job!