BlackFluteofLove
After reading this chapter I gotta say, wow what a rush. That first chapter really set things up well and hit hard, going from happy to cheerful to creepy in just a couple of sentences. I really was not expecting that tone shift. My only criticism is that the last part felt a bit abrupt as I was not entirely sure what exactly was happening in the change. I feel like a bit more time could have been spent exploring the change in scenery. Aside from that though, the story is excellent so far and I am really looking forward to seeing how the story develops.
Its really interesting book. I liked the plot it's different. The first chapter itself made me read further. The way of writing is also great. The synopsis is good but maybe you can make it mysterious by giving less info like the nightmare I can be easily guessed it was her sister. But I liked this book and will surely add this in my list. Kudos author keep it up.
Yes, this is a good book. Not so common plot,but I have read one or two plots like this. I expect there are a lot of twists here. keep it up! I just think you might want to work on the narration part. sometimes, you are using present tense, which is supposed to be past in past tense since you are using it most of the times. But I really like the plot, all in all. đ
This is the first story that am giving a five star.đman! I loved, loved and really loved the chapters so far. When is your next update.? Cant wait to read more of your content. Your characters are well developed and the storyline is superb. The first chapter got me holding my breath and the last one left me in suspense? Kudos Author. Give me more to read