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nice! you have there ideas that are uncommon or not so cliche. keep it up, author. it's just that the chapters are short. most of the readers here prefer long chapters. but it's up to us, authors to decide for our works. what i can say is though the chapters are short, the story is still going fine along. good job!
Yes, this is a good book. Not so common plot,but I have read one or two plots like this. I expect there are a lot of twists here. keep it up! I just think you might want to work on the narration part. sometimes, you are using present tense, which is supposed to be past in past tense since you are using it most of the times. But I really like the plot, all in all. 💙
I'm not yet done reading this. But I'm already hooked up to this book. Among the novels I have read these past few days, this is the best one. No favors, no lies. I couldn't find any corrections. Most of my reviews to other novels have suggestions, but I could not think of one here. This is perfectly written. How to be you? 😭😁 I'm a fan. 😊💕