Grand_Void_Daoist
I quite liked this story, it has great development and I think it has potential. It's quite slow paced and I don't think all chapters were good. Chapters are really short, but that's alright, I liked the story. It's a shame that there are locked chapters, would really love to keep reading, but it's not enough for me to start paying. Keep up the good work Author!
I read to chapter 60 for a reference point: Writing quality is good with what seems to be stable updates. Author may want to use a thesaurus to add more flavor to his text though. World building for both in game and the MCs world is progressing albeit slowly. Author needs to correct some errors in early chapters with the MCs lvl and maybe talk more about the games login times because I was left confused. Don’t think this one is for me right now but I hope the author keeps at it for his readers