Reviews of Urban Primordial System

Nice story, go to save my Reading List. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

the book is nice super nice in fact 8 like it if only the could update more Chaters pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssseeee😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍

i love the story and i hope its updates comes faster cuz I'm eager to read more ............................................................

I have only read 7 chapters and so far it is interesting, but the grammar is too lacking. There are entire paragraphs without a single comma and the sentences can be a bit wonky at times. It makes it unpleasant to read. Other than that the beginning seems fine.

Chapters are too short to make reading interesting.