Reviews of Urban Primordial System

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the book is nice super nice in fact 8 like it if only the could update more Chaters pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssseeee😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍

So far this has been an excellent book to read, goin between each character an their problems/worries is great. Keeps me wondering what is next to happen to any of them.. love the book so far

Read 102 chapters. Your novel is very good, you did the right thing in choosing the fantasy genre. Everything is great, the only negative is that there are few chapters)) I wish the author patience and success in all his endeavors. Thanks for the great story

The storyline and characters of this novel are really good, I am looking forward for the character development of MC and heroines and the future plots and challenges. I recommend you all to read this novel.

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this novel is so good 5 stars

i love the story and i hope its updates comes faster cuz I'm eager to read more ............................................................

I have only read 7 chapters and so far it is interesting, but the grammar is too lacking. There are entire paragraphs without a single comma and the sentences can be a bit wonky at times. It makes it unpleasant to read. Other than that the beginning seems fine.

Chapters are too short to make reading interesting.