Review Detail of HamDerKammem in Urban Primordial System

Item: Urban Primordial System
Rating: 3.2

Review detail

HamDerKammemLv131yrHamDerKammem

I have only read 7 chapters and so far it is interesting, but the grammar is too lacking. There are entire paragraphs without a single comma and the sentences can be a bit wonky at times. It makes it unpleasant to read. Other than that the beginning seems fine.

Urban Primordial System

Dark_Sovereign_28

Liked it!

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HamDerKammemLv13HamDerKammem

I have now read up to chapter 30 and the grammar is a little better or maybe I have just gotten used to it. The story is progressing in a decent manner and the MC is gets some really OP abilities. I would advise the author to spent more time editing the chapters if possible because the story has potential.

1yr

Dark_Sovereign_28AuthorDark_Sovereign_28

I check the chapters twice before uploading them, yet even still their are some mistakes which I overlook unintentionally, if you see one, you can comment on the paragraph, I'll try to edit them as soon as possible

1yr