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This is such a wonderful story. The pace is a little bit fast but it's perfect for me. What I loved the most is the sense of humor of the author which you can see in this story, as there are many funny incidents. The author has taken time to build the world background and the characters are so lovable. My favorite one is definitely XiaoHe. Keep up the good work author!!
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The part which shows the possession of spirit is super awesome. Specially the line loud and clear. The story is awesome and interesting. The only thing I feel can be improved is the chapter names. I know it completely depends on author but it can be a little different. They are good though. Luckily tm chapter 20 it was a smooth easygoing story with no dark plots. I must say this is a great read. Keep it up author. And if anyone is thinking if they should read it or not, just read the first two chapters and I am sure you won't be able to stop...like me hahah. Thanks to the author for bringing such a great story to readers like us.
Contains beautiful phrasing and imagery. The plot is very elaborate, and contains a decent amount of gore and divine retribution. I especially enjoy this novel because it shows that there are repercussions for your actions. I love the character development. Overall you are doing a fabulous job author. ππ