Review Detail of Sally112425 in The Vulgar Mortal [BL]

The part which shows the possession of spirit is super awesome. Specially the line loud and clear. The story is awesome and interesting. The only thing I feel can be improved is the chapter names. I know it completely depends on author but it can be a little different. They are good though. Luckily tm chapter 20 it was a smooth easygoing story with no dark plots. I must say this is a great read. Keep it up author. And if anyone is thinking if they should read it or not, just read the first two chapters and I am sure you won't be able to stop...like me hahah. Thanks to the author for bringing such a great story to readers like us.