Lievel_Veltrandt
I have so many things to point out. The start is pretty nice, and neat. However, for some reason, it just becomes... how should I say this, weird afterwards. The plot is quite... unique I guess? maybe you're trying to diverge from the usual face-slapping cultivation novels. But somehow, I really don't understand what the **** they're doing. I feel like the reasons on why they were there is forced, and kinda like an excuse to just play around. Also, I love Arkenvalle by the way. Please give her more screentime. In human form, please.
The minute he joined his mom and became her deciple the story went downhill and became cringe worthy honestly I don’t care for sentimental stories I thrive and enjoy chaos and pure unfiltered evil so this story is not for me I saw the antihero tag and got excited about this but the mc is soft and pitiful nevertheless this story has great Potential and others will enjoy it so don’t take my criticism seriously and keep writing ✍️
I don't know Why but............ I like this book well written and the Action scenes are Great as an author I struggle to Write Action Scenes but it seems to come to the You easy. Another thing I like about the book is that the main character is likable. I have only Read A few Chapter but this book is now added to my Libary
Just read some few starting chapters and I must say it's really well explained. The chapter one fight was also done so well. It sure deserves a 5 start rating. I hope that I will also be able to write and explain scenarios like you someday. Keep Writing daily [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
SHAMELESS REVIEW FROM THE AUTHOR!! Or not exactly shameless...Well,in any case, I wrote this book about four days ago. When I saw the WFP for the week was about Second Chances, I was like 'Holy sh*t I always wanted to write one of these!' so I started this book and joined the contest. Anyway if anyone likes this book, It'd be great help if you comment or make a review so I could see where I am lacking. And also, have a good day