Review Detail of Pen_2_Sword in The Rise of The Divine Sword

I have so many things to point out. The start is pretty nice, and neat. However, for some reason, it just becomes... how should I say this, weird afterwards. The plot is quite... unique I guess? maybe you're trying to diverge from the usual face-slapping cultivation novels. But somehow, I really don't understand what the **** they're doing. I feel like the reasons on why they were there is forced, and kinda like an excuse to just play around. Also, I love Arkenvalle by the way. Please give her more screentime. In human form, please.