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Before anyone of you starts reading this, y'all should expect something quite boring because all of us want action immediately or chemistry to happen. Please, delete all of that thought, because a great story doesn't start on that, it needs character, dialogue, and most of all storyline, it's a basic thing that the author has but not readers. So if you're good for some good'all novel, start with this. English is pretty decent, the grammar is consistent, and the pace is quite good. The cons that I only sought on this one, for me of course, is the dialogue. Just for me of course, but you should not asking that for me because all of us have preferences for each other. Have a great day! π
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I must say...You really know a way with words, characters, and events to create a fabulous plots and moreover a story. the way you right is awesome and I really had fun reading it. Both the are good in their own way and development. I love them both and the other characters as well. you have really worked hard...and i hope you will forever and make even better. Few errors happen but it won't be a problem for you. Keep going! you are great!!! I love youβ€
I loved the way author introduced the role of female lead character. Transformation from weak to strong is really appreciated. The siblings bonds I really loved that. The stable updates of the story really attracts me to read it more. Keep up with the job author[img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins]