Mahaksh
I had to leave this here. I just completed the first 100 chapters few days ago and am somewhere around 120. This story started out slow, but the quality of writing has improved so much in such short time! I got goosebumps reading one of the chapters. The story turns dark and I love it. It's definitely worth reading till at least Chapter 110. You won't regret it. I'm excited to see how the magical and political situations develop and looking forward to explore more of Xelgar. P.S. Alora best waifu
This is probably my first mostly positive review here. What I like most about this novel is that the author does away with most of the clichés of this kind of novel and the novel feels authentic. The common tropes you'd expect are just not there and the best thing is that there are none of the most common annoying tropes. The best thing so far is the story's development and what keeps me reading the novel. If I had to name its weakest point, that's the characters. I don't like most of them if I'm being honest. Aside from Daisy and the kids. That includes the main character, he is overly trusting even when he has all the hints that he should stop just trusting people for no reason. I sincerely hope that will improve in the future because an unlikable main character is a huge detriment. Although I did like some twists with the characters. Like one of them being surprisingly good while another one isn't. Anyway, if the main character sees some development, I think this novel has enormous potential.
Hey guys, Finally, part 1 of volume 1 is over and I am really happy that you guys were here reading my story. I know I am not that much of a good writer and this is also my first book, but I am working hard and improving on a daily basis and improving my writing quality. I have a really good story to show you guys and with Part 2 of volume one you are gonna really love it. I am gonna attempt to pull something off really difficult thing in this part but it will be worth it. Please keep supporting me through comments, power stones and etc, I will make sure to make every single coin count spent on this book.💕🙌
Resplendent, I have to say it's an excellent book originally I planned to drop a review after the first five chapters but then I was lost reading it until the eight. The book starts of slow but that's the joy of it because you get to observe from the eyes of the MC his everyday life. The description of each character was more than perfect and overall the storyline is broad and enviable.