Review Detail of Glezeri in The Moonlight Swordsman
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no world background, the writing quality is amateur, no grammar mistakes, it's just the delivery, not even gonna go into the mc cause I would be ranting for too long, at ch 23, things just happen, there's some mystery past with amnesia maybe there'll be a story, can't say if it'll be good
The Moonlight Swordsman
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thnx for your honest review man, the story which i have made is long, so the world buildup is kinda slow but it will to come life slowly in the upcoming chapters, as you can already see Aizel is still in the first town, I am a amateur as I already mentioned I am newbie and I am improving as I write further chapters đ . About the Aizel past, I can't say anything as it will lead to major spoiler and everything is related which will reveal in further ahead in the story.