SomeSpookyGuy
i love your novel sorry for short comment because almost every word that i could say is already been said , by others but , i do hope you keep creating more wonderful and godlike novels because it keeps people out of there depression and be more addicted to novel rather then being obsessed about suicide
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I wouldn't complain about the MC being so ridiculously strong at the end of the whole story, but at the beginning of the story when he's a baby he's stronger than everyone else. I mean, he had to interact socially with people to move the story forward, so he had to gradually get stronger and build his mindset and relationships. But now he has a one punch man like power and actually the story and the naruto universe doesn't matter. At 10 or 20 years old, I doubt that all Otsutsuki will even matter. Actually he can do it at 5 because he has 2 more unlimited wishes.
Writing is fine and grammar isn’t horrible Idk about updating since I only read 12 chaps Story is ridiculous man is getting op abilities from every anime has no story really. Was the strongest in Naruto before he even went on a mission or did anything really it’s just dumb like what am I gonna read him doing stupid system quests that are easy until meats Lafita which he will sneeze and she’s dead like garbage story
well fanfic with so many contradictions and plot holes that i cant count them all. Fight scenes are hard to understand, as whole story goes. mc is a puppet not a character, lack of self, cant really read it anymore. op mc who can basiclly destroy the world cant save kushina and minato. makes no sense
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