Reviews of The Merc with a Mouth in DC (Rewriting)
The Merc with a Mouth in DC (Rewriting)
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I'mma give myself five stars. Because if I don't, who would? Lol, anyways I am not a perfect author, so mistakes could happen from time to time. If that time comes, then please forgive this author. Anyways, just read with your maximum effort if you like this book! And if you don't... Well, Godbless.
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Flat 1 Star for the no harem tag, that's not a feature. That's like a no pedo*phile tag and just shaming some people who like a harem and is not something inherently bad like pedo*phile's which I don't want in stories and still wouldn't be a feature. I personally am ambivalent towards harems in stories but noticed that they often make subpar stories and end in a sad s*ex fest and nothing else to show. If you want to tag it either tag it monogamous or single mc. Harem is a warning tag for people, no harem is a stup*id fad of the community to express their dislike towards harems. Else be consistent if you dislike same-*** relationships write no homo, don't like Christians no Christians, and if you dislike humans write no humans.
Flat 5 star for the no harem tag Thats like having a goose with just another goose and also an egg, like what is going on with the other gooses that have more than one goose mates right everyone? So (repeat my self here and turn my argument upside down *dont forget to delete this note*) the egg that the gooses have is also just one that being said the goose mate can only be one. Ps: this is clearly not a review joking about the only 1star review this book has so yes take this 100% serious
The writing quality for fanfic is pretty high with only minor errors and the author even uses good spacing and I am not forced to read a block text. The only thing which I find slightly annoying is that he uses ALLCAPS for shouting. What I am ambivalent about is his use of many comic sounds, which is classic Deadpool and on one hand, a feature that shouldn't be missing, but I personally find a tad annoying in text, not in comics. For a person, without too much comic knowledge I can't say too much about the author's portrayal of Deadpool nor DC except that from my point of view he feels like Deadpool should act, and from what I've read in second-hand reports the only consistency in Deadpools comic career has been inconsistency between authors, which should therefore cover any minor discrepancies if they are even there. It is too soon for world-building or story development to say anything about it for now, except that it seems promising. Update frequency was vaguely described in the author's note and I personally would like specification even if it was just an "updates are irregular" notice. Helps the reader know it isn't abandoned if there is some break so they don't get antsy and the author saves himself self-imposed pressure, which I believe heightens the chance of an author to pick it up again after a break. The 4th wall breaks in this story are done really well and even I as a person who tends to dislike them was rather entertained with them. My other review towards the "no harem" tag factors into this one in so far that I was more lenient with the points. P.s. For those who say I shouldn't throw stones here's a little self-reflection. If I'd rate my own private attempts in creative writing they would be all flat One Star(and not because of tags) maybe 1.6 Stars if I gave myself pity points for grammar and writing. I'm just harsh with points to everyone including myself. P.p.s Do you guys know how tedious it is to write this with a broken laptop keyboard(the right side only works with brute force)
So far this has been a very fun read, the characterisation of deadpool is pretty accurate, though Batman feels a bit off. The story is pretty good so far, a bit cliche but there's nothing wrong with a bit of cliche. The only real bad side of this story is the writing quality, about 80% of the time it's great but sometimes you use the wrong word or wrong form of the word.
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