Review Detail of DaemonSzym in The Merc with a Mouth in DC (Rewriting)

So far this has been a very fun read, the characterisation of deadpool is pretty accurate, though Batman feels a bit off. The story is pretty good so far, a bit cliche but there's nothing wrong with a bit of cliche. The only real bad side of this story is the writing quality, about 80% of the time it's great but sometimes you use the wrong word or wrong form of the word.