Reviews of The Mech Touch

10k chapters seems not so far anymore xD

Some of you will like it but for me I want my time spend reading 700 chapter back. What a waste of time. I keep reading this far because I want to reserve my judgement but yeah, if you dont like it in the first 300-500 dont bother continue.

4000 Ch+ One of my favorite novels. World building 5 Mech/tech concepts 5 Flow in story 5(once you accept it is 10k long) Ves Pre Gloriana 5 Ves Post Gloriana -1 When I read this I feel like ves has become some sub in a fen,dom fan fiction novel. Reading the novel at this moment is like a toxic/abusive relationship I can't end. Gloriana. does more harm than good to the novel. *Spoiler* 20% good since he isn't a 40 year old vir.g. 80% bad since she sucks. She just sucks. 1) She doesn't care about him at all. 2) She is using him like a gold digger and he loves it. 3)She stalks him and uses her power to abuse him until he is okay with her watching him 24/7 4) She tell's his secrets to other people since she thinks his opinion are trash. 5) Her ability is trash and irreverent at this point. Her concept has evolved into a worse version of his, but does speed up the process, 6) She has trained him like a dog/lab mouse with chemicals and psychology. For example He gets to the point where he has to breathe in her perfume to get through the day. It is not love, but straight addiction. She had it created in a lab with his dna as focus to attract him. 7) Prior to his mother she would have kidnapped him and forced him to work as a slave. This is not focused since his mother exists, but the fact she considers it is hypocritical of the other chick. They are the exact same. Just kil her off and I would rate it 4.2 instead 3) She has been around, but won't let him pre relationship. She

Started strong, was a great read then the war arc happened. Still in the beginning of the war arc but I’m contemplating if I should drop the novel or not. The war arc is already annoying and people are saying it’s 600+ chapters. Idk if I can last 600 chapters of useless and annoying filler.

I liked it at first but i ended up become frustrated more and more as i read on. Do get me wrong the novel is very well written but when the novel is about him designing mechs then it goes into a 700 chapter arc without any real progression other then the mc being pushed into danger over and over it got old. It went from the mech touch To a touch of mech

Bad prologed text. The authorsss just don't want the story to progress. Writing the same thing over and over for chapters. Milking this novel to the bone. Let it dry and burn.

Starts out fine, getting very long winded with very little meat in the story as time goes on. First arc is still pretty enjoyable regardless.

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A good story!!! <3<3<3 Got me in the fishnet right after reading the sypnosis heh Thanks for your hard work and keep up the good work :))) The story development goes smoothly and makes you eager the learn what comes next I only just started reading, and I litteraly just read the first dozen or so chapters, but I'm still enjoying myself and I'm hoping what comes next will keep making me enjoy reading and take me in a beautiful adventure!

Pretty well written for a work without an editor. Which at times this seriously needs as there are sporadic incomplete sentences and a few glaring math mistakes... *cough* Intelligence stat *cough* which an editor would remedy easily, or at least a proofreader other than the author. For me, the amount of dumb situations and questionable decisions that such an intelligent person gets into or makes, makes me understand that intelligence does not denote wisdom. But then again I'm trained to cover my ass when performing my duties and how to identify potential vulnerabilities and assess risks from prior military and current employment, but I digress. For the most part, Ves, the MC makes pretty good believable decisions... you know, for a civilian. I also blame Ves' naming travesties on his mediocre creativity. We'll see if it improves as it goes up. XD lol I'm just nitpicking as I really like the story so far. The novel just needs a little extra attention with perhaps another set of eyes to prevent easily fixable reoccurring mistakes from appearing... *ahruhuhuhuhruhIntelligenceStatIsWrongkhhhrrruh* *Cough* sorry, a bit of flem in my throat.

It's a sad day when you have to drop a fairly decent novel.. The story is quite slow paced and now that it's charging SS i have to drop this one.. I won't be spending SS by reading text blocks of imaginary parts that will change in every mech MC makes that makes up a whole chapter..

Unfortunately, this is a book with a brilliant start that suffers from too many flaws. There are honestly not enough good sci-fi stories on this platform, and this was one of the good ones but I believe that the Author’s goal to reach 10k chapters has caused him to compromise the story. Examples of bad writing decisions are the questionable integration of information dumps, the inclusion of terrible jokes that aren’t entertaining, side or support characters that become one dimensional, and more. My personal beef with the story is that the MC is a mech designer, but the longer the story advances, the less frequent this happens. It’s so bad that a reader will have to wait hundreds of chapters to see a new mech design in later arcs, with no reasonable obstacles from preventing him from doing so. There is also a system in this book, one that is seen often in the beginning, but just like the designs, will also disappear for hundreds of chapters. So if you started reading this story because you enjoyed the process of the MC using the system to design, I’m sorry to say that like me, you will be disappointed the farther in the story you go. So this is the end for me, 5600+ chapters that resulted in a uninteresting experience that greatly deviated from the original vision.

The story is Ok but the development is trash like you see the 5000+ chapters you know it's taking to long.The main character personality is solid most times however he's basically a doormat to his wife he lets her basically verbally abuse him and basically is a gold digger cause you want me to believe she should be able to spend his mta credits on her own person clothes and handbag.Like brush make your own mechs to get yor 10k + mta credit handbags.Other problems with the story is that they rarely give the supporting cast personalitys.like only few people have any sort of personality and it's only the main main supporting characters

You want my golden tickets? Then stop doing these things: first, a conversation between Ves and someone else where five lines are said but paragraphs of garbage constantly breakup the conversation. Figure out a better way to info dump. Second, world events constantly happen but they happen so often, all the main characters can do is react to them are given no time to do anything else despite the fact many of their solutions who help mankind. And also do these things: remember how everyone loves your story in the beginning because of your portrayal of mech design and the system. How about you bring that back? People are tired of waiting fifty plus chapters to see a chapter about mech design or the system. You literally took away the thing that people loved about your story to change to your main character from an intelligent and creative mech designer that braved many situations to a scared, paranoid , mess of a coward who over thinks everything and makes some of the dumbest decisions possible. Also make the support characters matter again because we all know they don’t mean nothing now

I read up to 4500 chapters, here's what I think. This story can be really enjoyable and very frustrating at the same time. It's very slow paced, and above all there's a lot of chapters that go further in technical details (I admire how the author can imagine and write all this), it's both a strong point and a weakness. You can see that the author is very passionate and his universe is incredibly vast, rich and consistent. But if you focus on the development of the story, then you'll probably have to read diagonally, without dwelling on all the lenghty descriptions. But once you've gone through hundreds or even thousands of chapters, you have to admit that this slow pace has given the story, the characters and the universe a lot of depth and consistency. It's the case with the Bright-Vesia war. Now I'm gonna insist on two point that could make you respectively continue or drop this novel. Spoilers warning. 1/ First, I think this novel is one of the few that explores the power and abilities of the mc in surprisingly logical yet still positively unexpected ways. The power to bring mechs to life seems simple at first, but the author manages to get so many variations out of it, not missing the details and implications, and above all, the progression and discovery really has the scientific feel. This also fits in well with the universe and motivates the development of the story, mixing practical challenges alongside more philosophical conceptions. 2/ So what could make you drop this amazing novel? One name: Gloriana. Or should I say the disproportionate influence her ridiculous views have on the mc and the story development. I'm sure the author wanted to create an original female character rather than a boring, likeable, romantic interest ; and to be honest, not all her interactions and dynamics are bad. It's like the Hexer Federation, despite being ridiculous, in term of psychological scope and background, it adds some deph to the universe. But the issue is both the dose and the impact. It's often more unbearable than anything, and Ves the mc has become quite pathetic. I dunno if the author has a personal inferiority complex towards women that he projects onto his mc. But between the castrating mother, Gloriana, the new "big" sister, it gives this kind of idea. And from my point of view, this unnecessarily parasitizes the story, to the point where even if you take it with a sense of humor, it becomes tiresome.

The author completely shifts the focus of the smaller and outright tells the readers to go f*** off period instead of having a system, Mecca novel that is relatively fun and interesting. Like the first 300 chapters you read. Instead, it turns into a book with over 3000 filler chapters that. Add nothing to the story comma nothing to our main character and overall bring down the novel.

this novel should change its name to the mech designers that everyone walks over

One of the most substantial and creative world, the length of this novel is a strength, it's never repetitive, all the character are different, all well written with no exception, the story has a real progression and can go for I hope at least 2500 chapters at least because it has so much potential and the author is actually capable of leveraging this potential, the world grow, the characters, everything does and stay coherent. It's one of the extremely rare novel where the potential is present, exploited and where there is a sense of growth without an overpowered MC or one that just become more powerful by having climbed the rank of Cultivation or by having bigger Stat, the character progress by learning, developing their specialty and through real trial. It is a real journey, one that I urge everyone to follow, because this is one of the greatest novel I had the chance to read

I Don’t know what the hype is about. Is just everage but long lasting.

Reading at a snails pace. So much diappointment I really wanted to like this book but everything has been a filler so far