Garvita_Kushwaha
Usually I'm not a big fan of horror but this story has got me hooked. Just when you think you've got it figured out, something else happens and you're shaken. I feel like I'm in the story with the characters, and it's thrilling. The characters are written beautifully and the world building is great. Keep up the great work, author!
This kind of story is mixing influences from Scooby doo and spiderwick chronicles, and surely from other young adult horror stories. It's refreshing, and you can't help but get dragged into the events by the characters. Dialogues are lively and well-written, even though some description could be added for each scene. The pacing is perfect, and there's always that kind of frightening, doubtful, and unnerving atmosphere kept at each chapter. I vividly recommend it!
Find this story a refreshing take on on over saturated field. The authors own creative Ideas brought the world to life and his well written writing style allowed me to live in it. Which is hard because most authors suck at doing so. Fantastic world building and description of events! I wish this book gets physically published because It would actually do well!
I like how some of the actions in the book realistic, and also... Although a bit vague with detailing, it is already enough to make you astonish and ask for more. Keep up this good book and one day will give the rightful attention. I already gave my suggestions, so please, have to think of it. Although I gave my corrections, I really like your book.