Read the first few chapters! I must say, I really like it! The grammar is near perfection, and the words and are just "Chef's Kiss." The author is also currently participating in the contest so I will also root for her, despite me also participating in it. Additionally, as you read through the paragraphs and sentences, you could definitely tell the care and love placed by the author! As a fellow Filipino writer, I am glad that more people from my country are creating more beautiful art of literatures. [img=update][img=update][img=update]

As a fellow author, competitor and friend of Reno. I will support his work despite the contests competition, after all I know that this work means a lot to him, and might even decide his future partner[img=recommend]

Have not read the story yet, but I am gonna say this, the cover is fire mah dude! Will be binge reading it once there's more chappies[img=update]

Interesting read! Binged all the available chapters in one go, the paragraphs flows nicely and there were minimal mistakes in grammar. Keep up the great work Author!!!

Thank you very much for bringing these up!!

Interesting story so far! There's only a few chapters so give it a try and I am sure that you wouldn't forget it![img=recommend][img=recommend]

Dis!

Greetings! The mighty author has descended from his self-imposed lockdown in his own room! I have now decided to take on the mantle of writing once again! I believe that I would finish this novel, however I can't guarantee a stability of updates as life takes shit on you sometimes, so I hope you can forgive me for that, but I swear! That I will not drop this book and the future books that will come along with this. (Definitely Not Foreshadowing). I plan to create and expand the universe of this novel through multiple novels, and I believe that as you read through this novel, you'll find a lot of stuff where you could start a new novel with it. Even so! This novel would have atleast more than 1000 chapters, this will be a kingdom building novel, and no there would be no Harem, because I don't like Harem, and managing that many characters going for the mcs p p would be hella difficult, so sorry buds, no harem! Also, warning! This novel would have a lot of violence and gore which would be extremely detailed because why not? I will also try to make it as realistic as possible while fusing in elements of fantasy such as magic, to be explained through the novel. Welp, that's all, let's all have a great time everybody!

Woah! Thank you very much, I will take note all of the suggestions, really appreciate it!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

It's great! I could say this, because, I barely read novels where the mc is a female, but still, this one hooked me up on the first chapter, its just that good. Why? The emotions are bursting from the writing, you could feel it vividly, which is very hard to achieve, moreover the conversations and paragraphs flows smoothly when you read it, so thats a thumbs up! Keep it up Author!

Read the first few chapters in another device, but overall, it is interesting, though it could help if after every quotations or speech by a character you'd show us their movements and other stuffs, so that we'd be able visualize it much more better. As a first review of this novel, I give five stars! Also read the other books first if you want to understand this. Great Job!

Thanks for the feedback! It's a big help mah dude!

Highly, Interesting read, the author also pumps chapter a lot everyday so that means there is dedication, which is why I believe that the author would see this novel through the end. Over all, try reading it for yourself so that you may see if it is up to your liking, and considering this is the authors first time making a big novel, I gotta give him some slack. Great Job Author, Keep It Up!

Five stars on all fours, but four star on the development, the story could use some speed, but I also understand where the author is going for, after all this is just a humble opinion from a fellow reader. So take your time author!

I've read the first chapter which is sadly the only chapter available as of yet, but I can definitely tell, that the Author is good, the characters does not talk like cardboard boxes and the conversations moves swiftly. My only complaint is that the chapter is too long for a webnovel, which I think could possibly turn off a few readers so I recommend reducing the word length of each chapters to 1-1.5k which is usually the norm, but overall I think its good!

Good Chapter!

Greetings! I like the idea of the novel that a system linking two people together, to be honest it is such a breath of fresh air in the world of novels with the system genres. So, I highly recommend to read this novel as for me it is already unique from the rest and not just some copy paste of the same style over and over again which is honestly already becoming boring, so take my word and read it!

Sorry bro, its not uploaded on other sites, and I have already dropped this book, but you can read my new book. It is named "The Interstellar Fleet Adventure Chronicles,"

not yet sure

Harem: Check!Beautiful Women: Check!Big PP: Check!Well, what are you waiting for? The god of masturbation is awaiting your service, urahh![img=update]