Review Detail of Monarch_Of_Death in The Legacy of the cursed Family

I like how some of the actions in the book realistic, and also... Although a bit vague with detailing, it is already enough to make you astonish and ask for more. Keep up this good book and one day will give the rightful attention. I already gave my suggestions, so please, have to think of it. Although I gave my corrections, I really like your book.