Reviews of The King Alpha’s Mate
The King Alpha’s Mate
jengreyy
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- Character Design
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I would’ve liked to know to elaborate about the pregnancy and the future of King Alpha and Queen Carmela, but it’s a good book to read. I couldn’t put it down.
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Honestly, this book is alright and I say that because of a few things. First off, right out the gate, she met the Alpha and found her mate. It would've been way better if the author waited a few more chapters because things just seemed rushed. Second, the lead male's personality and how he acts is infuriating. At times it can come off as snobby and just plain rude. Lastly, there are a lot things going on in the book so It can be extremely easy to get lost. So organizations would definitely come in handy. With all this being said and for you to have to start paying for chapters at chapter 7. (So you have no idea if you like it) This is book is just not for me, but author, you did a great job! And keep righting if that makes you happy.
For starters, there were many grammatical errors, though they don't really stop you from understanding what is being written. The characters were always introduced by their titles (for example King ____, Alpha _____, Luna ____, etc.) whenever they were speaking or mentioned so that was kind of annoying since we already knew what their roles were. The plot had inconsistencies (like how the witch was able to have visions only when it was convenient or how FL's father was a wolf hunter who hated wolves but easily accepted his daughter's fate). Also, once she was marked we were just supposed to forget the fact that he kidnapped her, was insensitive towards her, & that his mother drugged her under the excuse of it being for their benefit?
