For starters, there were many grammatical errors, though they don't really stop you from understanding what is being written. The characters were always introduced by their titles (for example King ____, Alpha _____, Luna ____, etc.) whenever they were speaking or mentioned so that was kind of annoying since we already knew what their roles were. The plot had inconsistencies (like how the witch was able to have visions only when it was convenient or how FL's father was a wolf hunter who hated wolves but easily accepted his daughter's fate). Also, once she was marked we were just supposed to forget the fact that he kidnapped her, was insensitive towards her, & that his mother drugged her under the excuse of it being for their benefit?
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